So here's the deal. This song is heading in a good direction but I think that it could do with some more instruments touching the song at the heart. From my view I like the cinematic entrance at the start and the chiptsune sounds pretty good however I would have considered adding a bit more to it. Some more synths should give it a bit more of a rhythm to the song and a bit more of a lively scenario. The lead needs a bit more work. From all your songs you seem to be able to conduct the rhythm perfectly fine with the various synths added but the lead also plays that important role where it catches peoples attention. It's important to remember that your rhythm and lead parts should correspond with each other to create a perfect melody. I liked the song throughout 2:12 where you hear more of that sweet chiptune sound. That's the kind of sound you want with your songs but don't just stop at one lead, go for two. With two leads you can maximize the songs true potential. Try to work on your lead parts and you'll be fine. Otherwise a nice soundtrack you got here.